7-7-7

The rules are as follows: Go to page 7 of your WIP, go to the seventh line, share seven sentences, and tag 7 more writer-bloggers to continue the challenge. 

tagged by @mirandatam

Going just by the draft of the next chapter(s) of Of Ingwë, the seventh page brought me to what will be the following chapter, but by going with the seven lines it ended exactly on the last line of the opening scene. That was neat.

Winds brought heavy ash to fall over the valley of Cuiviénen until a more powerful wind smelling of burning frankincense pushed in from the west, clearing the air of ash. Distant fires and the smoke and ash that they produced were not the only troubles to scare the elves. The ground would tremor violently, and people feared for their houses. After the sweet-smelling west wind, the tremors were never as savage, but it became common to feel the earth tremble beneath their feet.

It was the crashing thunder and lightning, and the bellowing sound that accompanied no lightning yet still echoed from every hill, that most frightened the Kwendî, for that continued even after the earth-tremors lessened. It was not normal lightning. Elwë described it as if a hammer was being taken to the roof of the black sky itself, trying to shatter it into a thousand pieces.

tagging ummm… @heckofabecca @anghraine @kareenvorbarra @allonsymiddleearth @swampdiamonds @yavieriel and @vefanyar. There! I finally tagged actual people.

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