OOooh man I don’t even know which story to pick? Do I go with one of the Angrod and the Bëor (which would probably be Irongrip and Rage-Bunny unless I go with the Gone Fishing or the Boromir in the Swamps ficlets)? Or the trilogy of old Bór women mouthing off in exasperation and disgust to the Fëanorians?
*spins the wheel of indecision*
The collective Bór quartet, for ease of answering
- ✄: something i deleted before the final draft
ah, I’m terrible in that I add to my drafts more than I can remember deleting things. Though i do know at least in my initial conception of the story that would the latest one with Borte the First, there was a stronger emphasis on her seen as this witch figure, and the warriors of Ulfang assaulting her daughters(-in-law). I do know in earlier versions of my idea, Bór was still alive post-Nirneath – that he was bed-ridden and dying when Ulfang/Lorgan’s warriors come, so Borte has to leave from tending his side to throw them out, so there’s the old Bór dying in the backroom so to speak while this is happening and Borte uses that as part of shaming the hostile warriors away, and then when Bór dies (idk? i think maybe he died in the middle of this face-off stuff?) that’s when Borte flees. But it was much simpler and more streamlined to have Bór die right before the Nirnaeth gets into gear, thus leaving Uldor less opposition and as this dark omen over the Bór going in.
Of the first one with Kreka, my favorite part still is when she kneels over the prayer rug, because the pose and the feeling of the carpet in her hands and the helplessness was so visceral when I wrote it and still is, and these thoughts of doubt and how she sees the options that aren’t options before and behind her and the memories of her family and the examples of her ancestors that she doesn’t know if she can uphold. It’s the core of …everything.
- ☠: something i found challenging
Kreka’s talk to the Fëanorians in the second fic (more the wrapping up that speech and their last words and making sure the flow of the conversation- I had the points and various lines, but making sure it flowed. And correcting the timeline intervals for everything to fit with canon). Then when I got to Borte it was hard to make sure it wasn’t too similar. And I went back to the dialogue a lot and added quite a bit to Maglor’s presence and made him more openly defending and welcoming to the Bór (but still that moment where he switches over and sides with his brothers because they are Fëanorians and only their direct kin count in the end. If I didn’t have that, I’d be wildly mis-characterizing those characters from the book) Also the packing scenes. What do these semi-nomadic people pack their items in and how do they carry them…
- ★: something i’m proud to have accomplished
I wrote several popular-ish stories off of mostly OC human characters from a group that had all of two or three lines in the Silmarillion. The stories made at least one reader think “what happened to the People of Bór?”
Interest and excitement for these Good-Guy Easterlings ♥