between roommate’s job-drama, 9 hour shifts, and con-prep, I have no brain to parse this right now, but remind me of this next week and I’ll probably have useful feedback for you
*hugs and sympathy for all the drama*
Thanks to the scramble thinking I’d have this Colorado trip and then it apparently not happening (right after I rescheduled my dental appointment, so yay another ten-day delay on pulling teeth) so suddenly I have this free time to fret over my stories. So on one hand, the young bucks of Cuivi stories are things I need to write out, the first meetings between Elwë, Finwë, and Ingwë, expanding the life and world-building of my prehistoric elves (and it’s fun to pull up the primitive elvish dictionary and find while there isn’t a word directly for beer, enough ‘drinking-goblets-partying and carousing’ that I can have the first agricultural elves and their beer, and thinking okay what do I remember about pottery and crap what comes before building actual kilns – which is a Noldor invention, duh, since I already have Míriel’s parents as the inventors of glass).
And do I have enough of a plot besides the idea: “Elwë’s family finishes roof of new storage building, invited his friends as part. Work in:
telu, tel-u “roof in, put the crown on a building”, atakwê “construction, building”, tupsê “thatch”. Feel smug that thatch-roof huts are canon-supported. Boys have a great time.“ Realize I had shied away from Cuiviénen-specific Silmarillion fan-fiction because of the heavy focus on vocabulary and language development. Look at what I’m doing. Weep.